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6 July 2015
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...or use an alternative?" he queried.
This weekend just gone I was scrolling through Facebook and came across a group where someone had posted something like this:
The reaction it sparked I thought was both eye opening and hugely divisive. On one hand you had people arguing that these alternatives were perfectly acceptable. On the other were the group that would state any editor worth their salt would suggest replacing them with said, or asked in the case of a question.
There was even one comment where the poster said they would not read a book where the author used anything other than said or asked.
This evening I've just finished reading The Long War by Terry Pratchett and Stephen Baxter - the first book I've finished in ages. These are a pair of best selling authors working on a collaborative project. I'd like to think they and their editor/s know what they are about.
I have to admit they don't use said, asked or any of the alternatives that often. They are happy to leave speech to stand on it's own as part of the dialogue.
However there are plenty of times when they do.
There are examples of asked and said like:
Roberta asked, "Birds, or Dinosaurs?"
"There are other sorts here too," Yue-Sai said softly.
They also often write sentences like:
Joshua grunted. "Makes you proud."
But they also write sentences such as this:
"Are you sure?" Captain Chen murmured.
or elsewhere:
"Here, Captain," the engineer replied promptly.
So they are happy mixing up the way they handle their dialogues depending on the narrative. I'd like to think I treat my works similarly. Although I have to say I'm more aware of not over using alternatives to said and asked just for the sake of it especially as a lot of my dialog is telepathic and not spoken.
I would be more than interested to here people's thoughts on this.
Phil
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What's funny to me is the vehemence displayed by people learning rules like this when, if you open any great book, you'll find the rules violated right away. If an author uses alternatives to "said" excessively then it's noticeable, and probably a sign of melodrama.
ReplyDeleteWhat's more disturbing to me is teachers telling kids not to use "said." Our kids have a list of words to avoid, like "stuff," because they are vague. However, said is as specific and clear as it gets, so I don't understand why it's on the bad list.
Joel
What's funny to me is the vehemence displayed by people learning rules like this when, if you open any great book, you'll find the rules violated right away. If an author uses alternatives to "said" excessively then it's noticeable, and probably a sign of melodrama.
ReplyDeleteWhat's more disturbing to me is teachers telling kids not to use "said." Our kids have a list of words to avoid, like "stuff," because they are vague. However, said is as specific and clear as it gets, so I don't understand why it's on the bad list.
Joel